From: Tucker Johnson <tucker@newer.systems>
Date: Mon, 24 Mar 2025 13:44:09 +0000 (-0400)
Subject: v2 changes
X-Git-Url: https://git.newer.systems/?a=commitdiff_plain;h=eaeacf9fcf48929aa8bd4b642b9e9a42196f2565;p=apples-and-pairs.git

v2 changes
---

diff --git a/manuscripts/violinII.ly b/manuscripts/violinII.ly
index b9a5826..12739e9 100644
--- a/manuscripts/violinII.ly
+++ b/manuscripts/violinII.ly
@@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
   \clef treble
   \tempo Rubato 4=64
   \time 5/4
-  R1*5/4 | %001
-  \tuplet 3/2 { r4 <cis''\2 e^\1>2~\p } 4~ 8 r8 r4 | %002
+  r2 d''2.\pp | %001
+  \tuplet 3/2 { r4 <cis\2 e^\1>2~\p } 4~ 8 r8 r4 | %002
   \time 3/4 r4 \stringNumberSpanner "II" aes'8\(\mf\startTextSpan g f4( | %003
   b,8) bes8(\glissando\> \glissandoSkipOn c4 \glissandoSkipOff \harm d8)  d8(\p\< | %004
   \time 4/4 \tuplet 3/2 { fis4\))\stopTextSpan \stringNumberSpanner "I" b(\startTextSpan f4~\mf } f8)\stopTextSpan
@@ -20,7 +20,7 @@
   \time 4/4 \tuplet 3/2 { d2 g,4->\2\f\glissando\pizz } \glissandoSkipOn e4 \glissandoSkipOff bes4\mp\shortfermata | %007
   \tempo "a tempo"
   r8 fis'8\(\p\arco\tasto gis8 a8 c8\< dis8\glissando b4\)\mf | %008
-  \time 5/4 a,4.\3(\glissando\>\ord c8~ c2~ c8)\p r8 | %009
+  \time 5/4 a,4~\3\>\ord a2\glissando \glissandoSkipOn \tuplet 3/2 { b4 \glissandoSkipOff c2->\p } | %009
   d'2. \tuplet 3/2 { r8 \stringNumberSpanner "II" e,8\(\<\startTextSpan cis } | %010
   a4 <a gis\3>4~ <a gis>8 c8~\mf c4\)\stopTextSpan | %011
   r4 \markSpanner "" "sul pont" ges4\p\<\startTextSpan ees'4 f,4 | %012
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
   \tempo "a tempo"
   r8 dis8~\tasto dis2 r8 fis'8\2\mp\ord | %014
-  \time 5/4 <gis, b,>2~ \tuplet 3/2 { 4 f8~ } f2 | %015
+  \time 5/4 <gis, b,>2~ \tuplet 3/2 { 4 f8~ } \tuplet 3/2 { f2 f4 } | %015
   \time 4/4 r4 g4\mf\> <e g>4 cis4\p | %016
   \tuplet 3/2 { r4 bes'4\< <bes g,>4 } <des\3 \tweak style #'harmonic-mixed g,^\4>4 <e, g,>4 | %017
   \time 7/8 <d^\4 b'\3>8.[\mf \stringNumberSpanner "IV" f16]\startTextSpan aes8[\stopTextSpan
@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@
   fis2.\)\> gis4~\p | %045
   gis8 r8 r4 r2\fermata \caesura \bar "||" %046
 
-  R1 | %047
-  r2 \stringNumberSpanner "II" \harm a'8\<\startTextSpan a,8\stopTextSpan <a^\2 e'\3>4\(\mf | %048
+  r8 b8~\pp b2.~ | %047
+  b8 r8 r4 \stringNumberSpanner "II" \harm a'8\<\startTextSpan a,8\stopTextSpan <a^\2 e'\3>4\(\mf | %048
   <a cis>8\< <a bes>8 <a g>8 f'8\2->~\f f4\glissando b,4->\> | %049
   \time 3/4 \harm a8\3 c,8 \harm d4.\4\mp f8\glissando | %050
   \time 5/4 <b, g'>4. \stringNumberSpanner "III" des'8->\startTextSpan bes\glissando e,8~ e4\stopTextSpan r8 \stringNumberSpanner "IV" ees8\startTextSpan | %051