for submission

diff --git a/book.ly b/book.ly
index a43a2fb837ca3bf75dcaedaa903f5d92fd259af1..6b9ad51b5168315a2c254e9b2a628d123094f115 100644 (file)
--- a/book.ly
+++ b/book.ly
@@ -45,13 +45,6 @@ piece = \markup { \large { \bold "anisomery" \number 1 } }
 \include "manuscripts/4i.ly"
 }
 
-\score {
-\header {
-piece = \markup { \large { \bold "panicle" \number 2 } }
-}
-\include "manuscripts/5i.ly"
-}
-
 \score {
 \header {
 piece = \markup { \large { \bold "cyme" \number 1 } }
@@ -79,7 +72,6 @@ piece = \markup { \large { \bold "circumnutation" } }
 }
 \include "manuscripts/15i.ly"
 }
-\pageBreak
   \markup { \null }
   \pageBreak
   \backcover

diff --git a/eng-files/paper.ly b/eng-files/paper.ly
index 3b529b600ccac90a9ec2ba91edf54a60801451c9..ce5fef9a072487b2b18069cd2ec97110ba0e515c 100644 (file)
--- a/eng-files/paper.ly
+++ b/eng-files/paper.ly
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 7) \oddfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 9) \oddfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 11) \oddfoot }
-      \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 13) \oddfoot }
+      \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 13) \null }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 15) \oddfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 17) \oddfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 19) \oddfoot }
@@ -26,8 +26,8 @@
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 6) \evfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 8) \evfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 10) \evfoot }
-      \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 12) \evfoot }
-      \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 14) \evfoot }
+      \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 12) \null }
+      \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 14) \null }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 16) \evfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 18) \evfoot }
       \concat { \on-the-fly #(on-page 20) \evfoot }

diff --git a/front-matter/back cover.ly b/front-matter/back cover.ly
index 6eac7e84818d810c4803a42d6b88fb725ec08de4..daedbbf4ae9c5a5a913d2eb4c175700a82153cef 100644 (file)
--- a/front-matter/back cover.ly
+++ b/front-matter/back cover.ly
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@ backcover = \markuplist { \fill-line {
     \line { \null }
     \center-column {
         \vspace #1
-        \line { \hbracket \bold \concat { "about " \xcomp } }
+        %\line { \hbracket \bold \concat { "about " \xcomp } }
         \vspace #1
-        \xbio
+        %\xbio
         \vspace #1.3
-        \line { ================================= }
+        %\line { ================================= }
         \vspace #1.3
         \override #'(line-width . 75) \justify \typewriter \tiny { This score was engraved on #(strftime "%m-%d-%Y" (localtime (current-time))), using LilyPond version 2.22.2. If you would like to view the most recent version of the input documents that generated it, visit \sans \bold https://github.com/tuckerjohnson/fifteen-inventions.}
     }

diff --git a/manuscripts/11i.ly b/manuscripts/11i.ly
index 51742b770ebc98f041aaa68a9d3b5f6ef96adaf8..e824e96e160a57d85fabf9c880f2fd270e4ee7cb 100644 (file)
--- a/manuscripts/11i.ly
+++ b/manuscripts/11i.ly
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 \accidentalStyle modern
 <<
 \relative { \tmarktfour \numericTimeSignature \override Hairpin.to-barline = ##f
-\time 3/4 a''2.~^\markup { \smaller \italic "fuggevole; spianato" } |
+\time 3/4 a''2.~^\markup { \smaller \italic "spianato" } |
 \time 2/4 a2 |
 \time 3/4 cis2.(^\p |
 \time 4/4 e2 fis,2~ |

diff --git a/manuscripts/12i.ly b/manuscripts/12i.ly
index 1b4bbc23367ebf392d01e1574542786d078b134d..eea62953f7c4896eaec01c3dd2ec72ac77e58a1d 100644 (file)
--- a/manuscripts/12i.ly
+++ b/manuscripts/12i.ly
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 \accidentalStyle modern
 <<
 \relative { \tmarktfourb \numericTimeSignature \override Hairpin.to-barline = ##f
-\time 2/4 s2^\markup { \smaller \italic "fuggevole; piu enfatico" } |
+\time 2/4 s2^\markup { \smaller \italic "spianato; piu enfatico" } |
 \time 3/4 bes''2.->( |
 g8)->^\markup { \tiny \parenthesize \dynamic ff } r8 r8 aes8~(^\markup { \tiny \parenthesize \dynamic p } aes4 |
 \time 4/4 des,1~ |
@@ -105,7 +105,7 @@ e,2.~ |
 }
 \\
 \relative { \tmarktfourb \numericTimeSignature \override Hairpin.to-barline = ##f
-\time 2/4 d,4( ees~ |
+\time 2/4 d,4(_\markup { \lower #4 \tiny { "[parenthesized, courtesy dynamics apply to nearest pitches]" } } ees~ |
 \time 3/4 ees2.~ |
 ees8) s8 s2 |
 \time 4/4 s1 |

diff --git a/manuscripts/6i.ly b/manuscripts/6i.ly
index add1a26866a05bf2c53fefcf23e89e7b4eb0627c..c6721ea058628cdf954175776f011d13e21e58ce 100644 (file)
--- a/manuscripts/6i.ly
+++ b/manuscripts/6i.ly
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 \accidentalStyle modern
 <<
 \relative { \tmarktfour \numericTimeSignature \override Hairpin.to-barline = ##f
-\time 1/4 s4^\markup { \smaller \italic "fuggevole; spianato" } |
+\time 1/4 s4^\markup { \smaller \italic "spianato" } |
 \time 4/4 bes''1 |
 \time 5/4 d2~(->^\mf d8 g,8~ g2 |
 \time 2/4 c4 f,4~ |

diff --git a/variables/program notes.ly b/variables/program notes.ly
index 4cc6e3023323bda7277be623ecc57bdc467d8ba9..ebe1f3065a7173a219d3938c0902a48e6826ed64 100644 (file)
--- a/variables/program notes.ly
+++ b/variables/program notes.ly
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 xpnote = \markup { \override #'(line-width . 90) \justify {
 At the start of 2022, I composed a short piece for piano constructed from descending
 diatonic scales and the 15 partitions of the 7-pitch diatonic set. This invention
-would inspire me to write more inventions. These \bold \italic "Inventions"
+would inspire me to write more inventions. These \bold \italic "Fifteen Inventions"
 correspond to one of the 15 partitions and, as such, have between 1 and 7 strands or
 voices. Inventions with the same number of strands or voices share titles and musical
 characters. I borrowed terms from plant morphology I felt describe these musical

diff --git a/variables/variables.ly b/variables/variables.ly
index bc89d1f0e9e085da65422533955eaee9dd78eb54..b2d0295782ca96d32f7c0a9e68ceecc83120a099 100644 (file)
--- a/variables/variables.ly
+++ b/variables/variables.ly
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ xtitle = \markup { Fifteen Inventions }
 xsub = \markup { selections }
 xcomp = \markup { Tucker Johnson }
 xinst = \markup  { keyboard }
-xdur = \markup { 20 minutes }
+xdur = \markup { \null }
 xcr = \markup \tiny { Copyright Tucker Johnson MMXXII. All Rights Reserved }
 oddfoot = \markup { \fill-line { \null \center-column { \concat { " - " \fromproperty #'page:page-number-string " - " } \small { \xcomp } } \null } }
 evfoot = \markup { \fill-line { \null \center-column { \concat { " - " \fromproperty #'page:page-number-string " - " } \small { \xtitle } } \null } }