typo / extra notes

diff --git a/applesAndPairs.ly b/applesAndPairs.ly
index 80f671781d918052b46d6bf27dc255bce0fe0ae4..bdb4bc2c563e7613045667b2a35db32529f97668 100644 (file)
--- a/applesAndPairs.ly
+++ b/applesAndPairs.ly
@@ -117,7 +117,7 @@
     \fill-line {
       \left-column {
         \line { \bold \xtitle " [2025]" }
-        \line { \xinst " | " 4 minutes }
+        \line { \xinst " | " \sans 5 minutes }
         \line { \xcomp }
         \vspace #25
       }
@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@
             not merely create a \italic correct depticion.
             The composition of \italic "Apples & Pairs" presents the duo of violins in dialogue, with each presenting a pair of
             contrapuntal strands.
-            The pitch of ordering of each strand is embedded so that when the are combined they appear in succsession and
+            The pitch ordering of each strand is embedded so that when the are combined they appear in succsession and
             simultaneously.
             These strands are projected onto a series of adjacent strings on each instrument.
             Another tension that might be important to the work, is between arrangement and depiction:

diff --git a/manuscripts/violinI.ly b/manuscripts/violinI.ly
index 4bead2cd5912b13f78faaa585bc2d29826219bd4..e4f90b76897d1ad04edfc939174ce5df1c88991b 100644 (file)
--- a/manuscripts/violinI.ly
+++ b/manuscripts/violinI.ly
@@ -160,7 +160,7 @@
       \time 7/8 \markSpanner "sul tasto" "ord" cis8\(\mf\>\startTextSpan a4 e8 g,4 bes8 | %052
       \time 3/4 f'2~\p f8 d8~(\stopTextSpan | %053
       \time 5/8 d4. \harm d4) | %054
-      \time 4/4 b1\)\fermata \bar "|."
+      \time 4/4 b1\)\pp\fermata \bar "|."
     }
     \new Voice {
       \stringNumberSpanner "IV" s4.\startTextSpan s2 |

diff --git a/manuscripts/violinII.ly b/manuscripts/violinII.ly
index 12739e9cd78b3395b85986c42704a3d4caf3dc6c..36b749b0642c7e9c17fe2d5cfabfff2b0053026d 100644 (file)
--- a/manuscripts/violinII.ly
+++ b/manuscripts/violinII.ly
@@ -82,9 +82,9 @@
   <a cis>8\< <a bes>8 <a g>8 f'8\2->~\f f4\glissando b,4->\> | %049
   \time 3/4 \harm a8\3 c,8 \harm d4.\4\mp f8\glissando | %050
   \time 5/4 <b, g'>4. \stringNumberSpanner "III" des'8->\startTextSpan bes\glissando e,8~ e4\stopTextSpan r8 \stringNumberSpanner "IV" ees8\startTextSpan | %051
-  \time 7/8 ges2\)\sfp\stopTextSpan r4. | %052
+  \time 7/8 ges2~\>\stopTextSpan ges4\)\pp r8 | %052
   \time 3/4 r8 \markSpanner "sul tasto" "ord" c8\3~\p\startTextSpan c2\glissando | %053
   \time 5/8 fis,4.~ fis4\stopTextSpan | %054
-  \time 4/4 <dis gis,>1\fermata \bar "|."
+  \time 4/4 <dis gis,>1\pp\fermata \bar "|."
 
 }